Friday, June 12, 2009
Group 1 assignment 2
There are many reasons why students attend Century College. A few examples are the great teachers, in-class and online class avaliblity, and also the low cost to attend. Century College also has a variety of courses to choose from which makes them very appealing to all sorts of people perusing an education. Also, It is a nice size campus, compared to others, therefore students get that one on one time with professors in a less intimidating and a lot more welcoming environment. We can now see why Century College is chosen by so many different people, because of the convienece, cost and great learning environment that they have to offer.
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Your topic sentence and concluding sentence are okay here. I also like the paragraph's sense of transition. After reading the second sentence, I sort of thought that "teachers, availability, and cost" were going to be your main topics, but you went on to discuss other things--how come? Did you just want to have other examples?
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ReplyDeleteYou have stated convincing reasons why students attend Century College. Your first sentence is a great example on how to start an opening statement. You stated the most important reasons, you felt, are necessary to explain why Century College is a good learning environment. Since you are a student at Century College, the information provided here is real life experience! There are no changes I would suggest for this paragraph. Great work!
ReplyDeleteI really like how you started and ended your paragraph. I can totally relate to your writng. Maybe you could put a bit more detail into the paragrah.
ReplyDeleteI really like your choice of topic. It was something we all could relate to. Some of the reasons you gave for attending century are some of the reasons I attend. I really like your example of one on one time with the instructors, which I think is very important. I would have just spent a little more time on organizing your thoughts. - Great job. Kristy (Kristine)
ReplyDeleteI like how in depth you went in describing the college, although to me this seems to fit better as a conclusion paragraph. Still good work!
ReplyDeleteYou have said some very nice things here about century college. It makes me feel happy that I go here lol. If i did not go here and I read this it would make me want to. you are right it is very appealing to me.
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