Friday, June 12, 2009

Writing college level body paragraphs (group 3)

In “Poets in the Kitchen,” Paule felt that her inspiration came from the women in the kitchen, and although she felt that they “trained her ears,” it was actually all of her reading that she did in the library while waiting for the women to finish their cocoa and tea. Paule was supposed to sit quietly at the library and the only thing to do was read. As she had mentioned she “was sheltered from the storm of adolescence in the Macon Street Library, reading voraciously, indiscriminately, everything from Jane Austen to Zane Grey, but with a special passion for the long, full-blown, richly detailed eighteenth and nineteenth-century picaresque tales.” Of course the more you read the more you can understand and appreciate the beauty of a book, and Paule learned to love reading. Through her reading, she stumbled across poetry by Paul Dunbar, whom she found she could relate to. She fell in love with his poetry and how it spoke to her. She became broadminded and empathetic to what she read. If not for the library Paule would not have fallen in love with reading nor stumble across Paul’s poetry. She would have never encountered such a person in her school readings; they did not speak of such people back then, and thus developing her desire of someday writing.

7 comments:

  1. I think you may have misinterpreted the assignment a little bit here--you didn't have to write on Marshall for 1.13; the topic could be on any subject you like. Still, it's a pretty strong paragraph. Your topic sentence is pretty clear and you make your point nicely.

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  2. I also think this is a very strong paragraph. You guys did very well. I especially like the emphasis on how import the library is

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  4. I like the way you elaborated on the point that she used the library to shelter herself from the storm (quotation from the passage). I did read this passage, and I found the writing was a very fluent style. I also like the way you stated the fact that she felt a bond with fellow women in the kitchen. If there is one thing I would change, it would be the length of the paragraph.

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  5. I think you did a wonderful job, interprating this paragraph. Lots of detail! Great job!

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  6. I felt it was a great paragraph. I was wondering the same thing about what you wrote about as Brian. However, no matter what you wrote about, it was a great paragraph.

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