Group 3 Rebbutal

We feel that people do need a basic understanding of English. Some Americans can be very judging people, there is no denying that. There are however always people willing to help. Should foreign people use judgmental Americans as a reason to not learn English? English is one of the hardest languages to learn. There are many programs and services to help people learn to speak English. We also don't feel that they need to become fluent in English or give up their own language. They should be proud of their heritage and use their own language. They do however need to have a basic understanding of English, for their own safety. In emergency situations it is important they be able to effectively communicate. Almost anyone would work hard to learn the basics of another language if they knew it could help save a loved ones life.

Group 2 Rebuttal

Well our question to you is, if you don’t work hard aren’t you just getting further away from getting that promotion everyone wants? You say that there is no guarantee to that you will have your job if you work harder, but anyone who is being a bit of an overachiever will be noticed a lot faster than someone who is doing bare minimum work. Everyone likes the thought of stay home with their family but it is not always that easy. No one really gets money handed to them and if they did this would be a completely different world. Most people use the term “hard worker” as a compliment not a means of making fun of someone for having goals and a good work ethic.

Group 2 support

People in American have many reasons to work their hardest even if they don’t like what they do. The first reasons. Most of us do it because we have no other choice (Curry). If everyone was happy with what they do, the world rejoice around this harmony. But the fact remains is that it’s not possible to achieve this level of joy.
Some people get stuck in jobs they once found suitable for their satisfaction, but for one reason or another, being satisfied with an occupation takes a turn south. If we didn’t work, what would we do? Would every one of us be homeless? Probably not, but again the question remains; what other options are available? Switching careers may be an option, but this is a difficult task to complete.
Being dignified is the best thing to do if someone doesn‘t like their occupation. If there are reasonable alternatives available, this is an acceptable solution. But simply giving up isn’t an option. There is nothing more noble than someone who can deal with personal preference when evaluating their current situation, and realizing that maybe this is the best option available.

Works Cited

Curry, Andrew. Across Cultures. Seventh. “Why We Work.” New York: Pearson Education, Inc, 2008. Print.

Group 5 rebuttal

Many people think that you have to work hard to provide a living for yourself and your family, but this is not true. In America there are many reasons why you should not work hard.You have no need to worry about a house as there are homeless shelters, for example, Maryhall. Another thing that there is no need to worry about is food. We are living in a country with very fertile soil. On top of that, we have places like Dorothy Day that will provide us food. Why pay all this money to make home cooked meals when you can head to the local soup kitchen and not only eat for free but have the meal made for you. Next, we have the gov't. the gov't has taught me that we dont have to work harder. we only have to work smarter. For example, instead of using your tax stimulis money the gov't gave out to pay your bills off you should take all the money and head to the casino. By doing so you can increase your chances of not having to work hard, or at all, by possibly winning the jackpot. The last reason you do not need to work hard is you can just take out loans and borrow money. It is clearly known that borrowing improves the economy. So, why spend your life working hard when you can get food, money, and shelter for free?

Works Cited

Bossman, Bob. Money as Debt II.Promises Unleashed. n.pag. Moneyisdebt.net. 2006.23 July 2009

Understanding English

We feel that all people living in America should have a basic understanding of English. The numbers of people that don’t speak the language continues to rise. “…nearly 50 million Americans spoke a language other than English at home in 2004—nearly one-fifth of all U.S. residents age 5 or older” (www.prb.org). We don’t think they have to be fluent; they just need to know basic English. The LPGA thinks the same way too “We want to help our athletes as best we can succeed off the golf course as well as on it.” (www.deseretnews.com). We have two reasons, first emergency situations, and second self sufficiency. Our first reason is for use in emergency situations. People need to be able to communicate effectively in case of an accident or a crime. Examples would be such things as a heart attack or stroke, burglaries, murders or traffic accidents. In all of these cases it is important to be able to effectively communicate with authorities, especially in medical situations where time is of the essence. People able to translate may not available. The second reason for a basic knowledge of English is for self sufficiency. They need to be able to shop for necessities such as food and clothing. It will also help keep them from being taken advantage of. The more English they know, the harder it will be for someone to convince them to do something they don’t understand. They may feel the person is trying to help them when in reality they are taking advantage of their lack of understanding.

http://www.prb.org/Articles/2006/IntheNewsSpeakingEnglishintheUnitedStates.aspx
http://www.deseretnews.com/article/1,5143,700254131,00.html

Group 5- Working hard, what's the point?

“It's true hard work never killed anybody, but I figure, why take the chance?” This quote said by Ronald Reagan should be the thought of every American citizen. In today's poor economy working hard does not guarantee job security. For example, why would one want to work hard at their job when there is not any guarantee? Many people are laid off from their jobs and at the same time many jobs are being moved overseas to reduce costs for the companies. On top of that, we have welfare and unemployment that can help to support us. I like the thought of staying home with my family and not having to work for my money at all. So, plain and simple; why work hard (or at all) when you don’t have to? Last but not least, working hard also takes away from your personal life. When working long hard hours you do not have the time or the energy to spend time with your family or friends. I believe that the verdict is clear; there is no need to work hard at your job!

Works Cited
Trunk, Pelelope. Dont work too hard; it’s bad for you.The boston Globe. 27, May 2007. Web. 23
July 2009

Dictionary Quotes. Word Press 2008. Web. 23 July, 2009

Group 1 Pro

It is important for men in American culture to look and act masculine. In American culture it is the masculine male that is considered strong, virile, and competent; able to handle any situation. Masculine men are promoted in TV advertising, calendars, catalogs, and magazines. “American culture does little more for a man than prepare him for modeling clothes in the L.L. Bean catalogue.”(Theroux 103)Even in today’s culture, it is the masculine man that is predominantly selected to play the leading roles in action films (Taken, Liam Neeson), TV series (NCIS, Mark Harmon), and even reality shows where the man is competing for the woman (The Bachelorette, http://www.buddytv.com/the-bachelorette.aspx). The American culture has not progressed as far as most would hope and the stereotypical man’s man is still prevalent through out today’s society. “It is no wonder, then, that men lean toward dominance, authority, and control. Deep within them rest an inherent need to sire, or mentor great men who will become the heroes of sons yet unborn” (Davis 2002). A majority of American women are attracted to masculine looking and acting men; therefore, it is important to the men of American culture to look and act masculine in order to find a suitable mate. It is evident that in order for a man in American culture to be successful in business and family, he must act and look masculine.

Example of expected masculine looks for Heros: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FggSxfP0DSg&feature=related



Works cited:

Davis, Robert G. "Understanding Manhood in America:The Elusive Quest for the Ideal in Masculinity." Heredom 102002 9. Web.22 Jul 2009. .

Carroll, Bret E. Passionate Manhood. Google Books, 2009. Print.

Gillespi, Sheena. Across Cultures. Seventh. New York: Pearson Eduction, Inc, 2008. Print.

Group 6 Support

People coming into America do not need to learn how to speak English because they should not let go of their heritage, there are many of travel and communication books to help them learn necessary words and they most likely came here to escape from suffrage and be free so they should not be stressed with learning a new language.   First of all, Americans can be very judging of people who do not speak English because many of them are scared of losing their heritage. " Don't be ruled by other people's low expectations of you” (Torres 163) is a great quote for non-English speaking people to believe in to stay true to their heritage. There is so much pressure on minorities to speak the language; maybe we should do something to make things "Easy to read", like the story by Amy Tan, whose mother always spoke "broken English” (Tan 49). Second of all, people do not need to learn how to speak English because there are many books like the one used by the boy’s mother in the story "Mute in an English-Only World" by Chang-Rae Lee. These books help them try and speak only the necessary words that they need to use in order to live. Third of all, people should not have to speak English because they most likely came to America because it was a free country. English speakers should not expect people to be fluent with English because we also use other languages in our every day language, "There are examples of Spanish, French, Yiddish, and German words that have been absorbed by English and are now used by Americans every day. It makes for a richer language and culture" (www.cbsnews.com). Therefore, instead of trying to get rid of the other languages we should embrace them therefore we can all be more excepting of people who speak other languages.

Group 6 Rebuttal

People coming into America regardless of their minority do not need to speak the English language. First of all, many Americans who speak English do not use the proper form. For example, people who speak English say words like funner, instead of more funny or phrases like, "that’s between you and I, instead of you and me (www.cbsnews.com)". Second of all, Americans are also not very patient or supportive of minorities when they are trying to learn English. However, Americans get frustrated when signs go up in neighborhoods that they do not understand (Lee 157) such as, Korean signs. Third of all, when Americans who speak English travel to other countries, like Mexico, we do not try and learn Spanish instead we expect the people who speak Spanish to help us out. We rely on them to help us with counting our money, where certain attractions are and saying Spanish words.  We both have learned this from person experiences pronouncing Spanish words. Therefore, we should not expect people who are coming to America to be able to speak English because it is indeed a free country! 

Group 4

Helplessness is a hurtful emotion that we can feel deep in our soul. In this panel we see Judd’s shoulders are hunched and they both have long, sad faces. This is provides an indication that they are feeling helpless. They are barely looking at each other; Pedro is hanging his head in embarrassment. He has had night sweats, and when he wakes up form the dampness on his shirt and bed sheets, the spotlight is shining on him symbolizing the illness of HIV becoming front and center(Winick #91, panel 1). It almost appears as though the spotlight is from one of his speeches. But now instead being the one to inform the public on HIV, he is being debilitated by it. But now the spotlight isn’t Pedro’s story, it’s his illness. Even though Judd and Pedro are the best of friends, there is a mutual understanding that they are both helpless in fighting this disease. Though Pedro is ill in this panel, Judd is looking to him for guidance and direction on what he can do to help his friend.

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Group 2

Anyone talking about a serious subject such as safe sex to a group of people can always bring the pressure down by using humor. Like Pedro on page 97, panel five in the book "Pedro and Me" by Judd Winick. In this panel Pedro is talking with a group of people about practicing safer sex; to do so, he shows them the importance of a condom. Pedro explains to the crowd, "If your partner says a condom is to tight--tell them to see a doctor'' (Winick 97). In this panel there is a halo light around Pedro; the rest of the panel is black as Pedro's demonstration is to be the readers full focus. His face shows humor by his open, upturned mouth and the way his eyebrows are cocked upward in the middle. The tendon on his neck popping out, along with the diagonal wrinkle lines in his forehead shows the amount of strain it is putting on him to stretch the condom to it's fullest capacity. His arms are drawn up in the air as if to say....TADA!! This panel fits the book "Pedro and Me'' because it illustrates a part of what Pedro does for a living, an AIDS prevention speaker, and how he uses humor to relate to and capture his audience's attention. Without humor, this panel would not have been an effective demonstration, as most people would have looked away, maybe snickered, and definitely felt uncomfortable.

Group 5

In the novel Pedro and Me there are several themes; one of which is friendship. The panel we chose shows part of that friendship. The specific panel is on page 90 when Judd asks Pedro “Is that bad?” This shows that Pedro is sick in some capacity and that Judd is concerned about it. While you don’t know exactly why he’s sick from this one panel, you can tell that something isn’t right with him. It fits with the rest of the book in showing Judd and Pedro’s friendship and giving insight into how it grew. The panel also gives you a little more insight visually by the use of a lamp that is turned on by Judd’s bed. The conversation itself is short and to the point, showing concern for Pedro and what may be wrong with him. While the conversation is simple, there are details in the panel that give more away. For example, the bold print on Pedro’s sheets will draw your eyes. The symbolism of Judd getting out of bed showing concern and a readiness to aid his friend also gives more detail than words itself. You can see from this one panel that their friendship is starting to grow, and will play a big part throughout the novel

Group 1 - Page 156

Pedro has just passed away. In the previous panel, the nurses had come in and discovered this. His breathing had become weak, so everyone knew the end was coming soon. All the people that had been in the hospital with him are now standing surrounding his bed. In the following panels, Judd is hit hard when he realizes how quickly Pedro has slipped away from them. A lot of the feeling that comes with this panel is actually from what is outside of it. The small panel makes it feel like you are looking down into the hospital room from the ceiling. The rest of both pages are completely black. It gives the panel a very cold, isolated, and sad feeling. There are no words in or around this panel. Considering what has just happened, the blackness speaks louder than words. The reader is feeling sad and vulnerable, much like the characters in the panel. The actual drawing itself is not very detailed; faces are not clear, nor are the background images. A symbol in the panel is the people surrounding Pedro. Throughout his life, he was always surrounded by people who loved him. For example, his father or any family never out casted him for being gay, or having AIDS. Pedro Zamora lived a short life, but touched the hearts of many.

group 3 5.4

This panel tells us a tragic story. We can all assume that this is Pedro's family and friends surrounding and embracing him. He doesn’t seem to have much time left. Winick made good use of the black and white contrast and the people’s facial shapes and expressions. In Pedro’s picture, Winick makes his face skinnier to give him a sicklier look and the people around him all have a look of somber. It is interesting that he uses only black and white for a comic strip. Much like Pedro’s life, it was just straightforward with no gray areas. Most of the background in the panel is black, showing that things are not going well. However, in the picture with everyone surrounding Pedro, the background is white. Even though the overall situation is bleak, the people around Pedro are bringing positive and loving attitudes; much like the shuttle driver’s at the beginning of the book. The words in this panel are very deliberate. The author uses “…” to show a pause, which adds emphasis onto the particular passage. He wants you to think back to an earlier time in the book. The woman embracing him is a symbol of his mother being with him in life and in death. It also shows that his mother’s dream of the family being together has finally come true. The bed is symbolic because Pedro is in his final resting place. In addition, the people surrounding him symbolize his strength in his time of weakness. I think this panel fits in very well with the rest of the novel since it was the tale of his journey from living with AIDS to up to his death. In addition, he is surrounded with friends and family. This is significant because he feared his family would not be there for him when he needed it most but they were.

Work Cited (Winick #148)

Definition of Ho - Group 4

Ho, not to be confused with the words "hoe" like the gardening tool, or "ho" in the phrase ho ho ho that is commonly used by jolly folk in red suits, is a slang term for a prostitute or whore. A whore/prostitute is someone who will perform sexual acts if payment can be arranged. The payment does not have to be money, but many times it is. One is advised not to go around saying this word as it has a negative connotation but the more it is used in popular culture, the less impact it has on the recipient. It may be acceptable to use around your close friends but will be viewed as a derogatory term to older generations. For example, if I were to say "Hey ho, what u doing" to my best friend, she would not be offended. On the other hand, if I said that same phrase to my grandmother she would be highly offended. So, it is up to you to use your better judgment when using the term "ho".

Group 2 - Wasted

"Skip was totally wasted last night." In the previous sentence, wasted is being used as a slang term. If you take the Webster's dictionary definition of wasted, you might have a hard time figuring out why Skip laid waste to something last night. Using the example, it means Skip was completely intoxicated due to the use of alcohol or drugs. Another example of the word wasted being used as slang would be, "Skip wasted that guy in the Halo." In this example, wasted means that Skip beat someone in a game, usually with violence. Depending on the context, the word "wasted" can mean several things, positive and negative. But amongst young people today, if you hear, "Jim got wasted and ran around with no pants on," you can bet it relates to intoxication.

repost : Group 1 Definition Activity (dude)

Tommy answers his cell phone and the speaker says, “What’s up dude?” This tells us that Tommy is talking to one of his male friends. Dude is at least two centuries old, and has taken on several different meanings. Originally it was used to represent a well dressed man, and later it was used to represent a railroad worker. It is currently used as slang to represent a friend or partner. Dude can be used to denote different feelings such as irritation, surprise, and excitement. An example of irritation would be Ravi sitting on the couch and Dale walks by and steps on Ravi’s foot. Ravi jumps up and says “Dude, watch where you’re walking!” An example of surprise or excitement would be Ginger getting off a plane in Arizona, and seeing her longtime friend unexpectedly. Ginger ran towards him exclaiming “Dude, I haven’t seen you forever!” These are a few examples of how to use the word Dude in current English slang.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Dude

Group Three--Bitch

In the english lauguage there are many slang words used on a daily basis; "bitch" is a very common slang word used. Before centuries evolved and using slag was inappropraite, the word "bitch" was used to represent a female dog. Although times have changed the word "bitch" can be used in a positive or negative matter towards another person however, its meaning depends on the tone the word is said. In a friendly encounter, someone could say, "Hey Bitch, whats up?", because the tone of the person saying this very calm and unaggressive the person recieving this statement would not be offended. However, this word may be used in a negative manner as well; for example, if a person says to you "That girl was such a bitch" or "You stupid bitch", you can notice that there voice is harsh and uneasily giving you the appearance that the are angry and upset showing you it was in a negative manner. Not only can the word "bitch" be directed towards someone, it can also be used as a figure of speech. When referring to completing a hard task someone may say, "That was a bitch". People use the word, which is meant in a negative manner, only to the task they are completing. Although, there are many ways to use the word "bitch" a person can always tell how it is directed towards the tone they use and how it is stated.

Group 5 the meaning of the word "Gay"

The word gay has many meanings in the English language, none of which are related. Originally, Gay was created to describe someone or something as being happy, but now, it is rarely ever used in that context. One of the ways it is currently used is to describe a person’s sexual orientation, mostly males, however can be used for females as well. It means that the person is sexually attracted to people of the same physical sex. This term can also be used in a derogatory way toward people who are “gay”. They may prefer the politically correct term, “homosexual”. The second is to describe something that the user thinks is stupid or lame. It could be a joke, an action someone else did, a particular activity, or something that the speaker felt that they should have known. You will hear it phrased as, “That’s gay.” Like many other words in the English language, “gay” has many meanings, and can easily be misinterpreted.

Group 1 Intro Paragraph

What do you like to do in the summer? If the answer includes water, concerts, fairs, or car shows, Minnesota is the place to be. As far as being on the water, Minnesota is The Land of 10, 000 Lakes, need I say more? The Taste of Minnesota and the State Fair both offer great food and outdoor music, along with many other things to see and do. Back to the 50s and Car Craft are two huge car shows held each summer. Whatever your interests, you will more than likely be able to find something to your liking in the hot and humid Minnesota summer.

Group 6 conclusion paragraph summer vs. winter fishing

Overall, the differences between fishing in the summer and the winter are varied. In the summer, you use a boat to move around a lake; on the other hand, in the winter you use your friend's beat up truck. In the summer you may find fish are closer to shore due to spawning, whereas in contrast during the winter months they tend to stay in the deeper waters for warmth. Simply catching the fish is different as well. During the summer months you cast out your line or drag it behind you in a boat, while you simply drop the line down a hole in the winter. All you need is the right equipment, knowledge, and technique and you could be on your way to enjoying a fresh caught fish dinner!

Group Three Intro

According to research shown on Dr. Jantz's website, www.overcominggambling.com, there are a few key red flags that tell you if a person is addicted to gambling.  Higher bets, long gambling sessions, and depression are just a few.  An addiction like this doesn’t get as much publicity as others would like alcoholism and drug abuse because one would think the consequences are more serious with them.  One would be dead wrong though.  Gambling addiction is a psychological disorder and is just as bad or even worse than those addictions.  People with this addiction need to get help before time runs out.  Some of the most popular and most successful ways to get help are attending a support group, spending time with people who do not like gambling, or seeing a counselor.

Conclusion Group 4

Many teenagers may have taken this movie seriously. However, as you can see, the rules in He’s Just Not That Into You rarely apply to reality. The movie’s theory of rules and exceptions to those rules, is absurd. Not only that but If the guy wants it to happen with a women, it doesn’t mean it’s going to happen. A guy certainly can't "make it happen" either. When men are mean to women, it does not necessarily mean they like them. Women should not make to poor mistake of believing this. Also, a man says he is going to call, and he doesn’t, a girl should not wait by her telephone. He’s not going to call. This movie was very funny, and could easily be interpreted as truthful by adolescent minds. It is important for people watching to realize that this movie is fictional, and not to apply these theories to real life dating situations.

Conclusion/Group 5

This conclusion is regarding Capital punishment being a moral and ethical concern.

Regardless of an inmate’s religious or racial background, if they have taken a life then all can agree that this behavior must not be tolerated. Whether they deserve to die for this crime is a question not easily answered. People have strong ethical beliefs and feel obligated to take a stand, whether it is for religious beliefs, racial disparity, or a defendant’s right to a fair trial. Yet, when it comes to the moral and ethical concern of capital punishment, there is still one fact that remains. As long as one human being feels the right to take the life of another, this ethical debate between life in prison and the death penalty will never come to an end. All eyes are on the accused as he lies strapped to a table; he watches the executioner push the poison into his veins and then all is finished.

Intro Paragraph/Group 2

"Aloha!" Where is the most sought out vacation place in the world that offers hiking to view out of World War II bunkers, to stand on the Bridge behind the wheel of an 1900 century whaling ship, or lay in the hot sand next to ocean? Yes, I am talking about Hawaii. There is no place other than Hawaii where you can fly over an erupting volcano to watch the rushing lava flow down the mountainside. Also, Hiking Diamond Head in Waikiki, is an exhilarating journey up to the highest point on Oahu where you enter the old World War II bunker. Lastly, the Tropical Rain Forest has the most unique tree's and plants. All of these are great reasons for families, honeymooners or just a trip away with friends, to visit the beautiful and astonishing Hawaii.

GROUP 4- HUNTIN' DEER by. emily nelson and carissa mossman

In MN hunting deer is a popular sport. Thousands of people are our on that crisp cold opening morning hoping to shoot the buck of a lifetime. This can be proved by stepping into a taxidermist shop. You will be amazed by the overflowing amount of deer heads they have in their freezers. Many people question the ethics of shooting animals but it provides many families food and an opportunity to control the population. Also, it allows you to enjoy the outdoors and become one with nature. All you need is a little patience and a buck grunt (and a gun) and you will find your self enjoying a sport that will leave your feeling accomplished with your trophy buck. So get out in that tree stand!!!

Group 5 body paragraph

One of the struggles with a career in Interior design in today’s society is the ability to find a job. With the economy in the state that it is in, not many people have the money or desire to spend hundreds of dollars renovating their homes. Their hard earned money is spent more so on necessities rather than luxuries. House payments, phone bills, groceries, and much more all come before painting the walls in your kitchen. In a time like thins, “needs” come before “wants.” For the more fortunate ones who have a steady income, updating the style of your home may not be such hesitation. However, the number of interior designers has a direct opposite correlation with the number of people remodeling their homes; that is, the number of interior designers and design firms is increasing, but the number of individuals seeking their services is decreasing. This is just one of the many struggles that an Interior Designer may face in today’s society.

Group 6 Paragraph

Throughout history, there have been many social changes in our society that have been, in part, associated with an activist’s or politician’s writings or speeches. To call attention to the issues they are presenting and to relate them to society as a whole, they use language in different ways. For example, Abraham Lincoln made the argument that slaves were not property that they were men and they should be treated as human beings with the same rights as the general population. Nelson Mandela fought with his words to eliminate apartheid. Martin Luther King, Jr. used language to describe issues that the Negroes were facing and to assign them human characteristics so that the general population could identify with their plight, which helped influence John F. Kennedy to use his gift with words and his charisma to affect change in governmental policies. These men, and many others, who have come before and after them, used the power of speech and language to sway, convince, teach, and modify beliefs so that healthy social change could occur.

Group 6 Konglish

Kenneth Woo was afraid to write. As early as second grade, he was told he had the gift. He fought this gift throughout his life, focusing on math and science, something he believed he should be mastering. In visiting his native land, Kenneth knew he must learn the Korean language; this was not something he was looking forward to. Learning Korean reminded him of learning English when he was young. How ironic that he began to learn the Korean language when he started studying the McDonalds menu board – something that reminded him of America. Kenneth had to go to Korea to find out what he had been running from all along, he had the gift of writing. When he picked up a pen, he wrote from his soul (heart) – the words would just flow out. The homeless lady was the clincher – she looked in his eyes and saw his soul. Ones soul is where the words form, and the soul shows through the eyes of a writer who sees the world as it is in their eyes. A gift is from God, and it should not be ignored. Not all are so lucky to receive theses gifts.

Group 2 Assignment 2- Body Paragraph

This would be an example of a body paragraph from an essay on baseball. Thesis being baseball is fun to watch on television,.

Baseball is also better to watch on television because of the announcers. The announcer is very knowledgeable about the game and can give play by play details. Even if someone isn’t a big baseball fan the game is easier to watch and understand on television because the announcers explain different plays. They tell who is doing well with hitting, who has lots of mistakes, and even about some off the field things like injuries. Sometimes the announcers do fun things like make comments on crowd shots. For instance the Minnesota Twins announcer Bert has a following of people who make signs that say, “Circle me Bert”. These signs make the television watcher feel more included in the game. Announcers make watching the game easier at home because of the sound. It is possible to multitask and leave the room if need be but still hear what is going on with the game. There are so many reasons why the announcer really helps to make baseball better on television.

Group 8 Body Paragraph

The due process criminal justice model values a person's liberties as listed in the Bill of rights above society's right to be protected from crime through the crime control model. This model holds it's major idea through fairness to the people being prosecuted. It realizes that there always is a margin of human error, either through the simple mistake of a police officer, or through the scientific process used to prosecute the accused. The Tucson Police Department reported a five percent error rate on tested DNA tissue at their forensics department and found twenty-four incidents of contamination in samples used, some coming from outside sources (Washington Crime News Service, June 20, 2007). Certain rights are giving to citizens and limitations are imposed upon law enforcement as well through this process. Law enforcement needs to state some of these rights, called a Miranda warning, when placing someone under arrest. An example of one of these rights is the right to speak to an attorney, and to have one present during an interrigation. Miranda V. Arizona (1966) found that no confession is admissible under the fifth and sixth amendments if the suspect hasn't been made aware of their rights. The fourth amendment limits random searches that can be made by law enforcement without a warrant. For example, Rochin V. California (1952) found that officers that entered Rochin's home without a warrant obtained drugs foceably and illegally according to the fourteenth amendment. Interrogation is strictly controlled to make sure that a citizen's rights are not broken or the person forced to admit guilt. Due process also follows a guideline of rehabilitation for criminals rather than extended incarceration, believing that people generally want to follow the laws. Overall, the due procees model follows closely what the United States constitution lays out to protect individual rights and helps prevent the abuse of power given to those who have sworn to protect, serve, and uphold the law.

Group 9 1.13

Many families experience the sadness and anger of having an alcoholic related to them. For instance: a parent, sibling, an aunt or uncle, maybe an alcoholic. When this person is close to you it may cause a lot of stress, emotional and/or physical pain in one’s life. Such as, when the alcoholic is in a drunken rage, or passed out and unable to function. This could cause some or most family members to have a growing concern about the alcoholic’s safety and/or the safety of others around them, an example a child or spouse. From just one person in the family that is an alcoholic, it may affect anyone and/or everyone around them. Many people conceder alcoholism to be a disease, some say it’s hereditary; in any case the alcoholic needs help. Therefore, it is very important to not take alcoholism lightly, and to encourage the alcoholic and his/her family to seek help whether it Alcoholic’s Anonymous or a treatment facility, or even Al-Anon meetings for the family members.

Group 8 Summary of Bambara

The Lesson, by Toni Cade Bambara, follows a young girl name Sylvia who is taught a life lesson by Miss Moore, her summer school teacher, at an upper end toy store. Miss Moore brings Sylvia and the rest of her class to F.A.O Schwartz for the day's lesson. As they look through the windows of the store, the children start picking out things they want and will buy. Then they notice the price tags for the different items in the store. As Sylvia goes through the store, she starts to think about who would spend this much money on a toy. What do these people do and why isn't she in on it? She thinks about previous lessons where Miss Moore talks about demanding their share of the pie, but doesn't really grasp the point of that lesson: you can't steal your place in the world; you have to demand it. One student at the end of the lesson seems to understand, but is quickly quieted by Sylvia who is disgusted with the student's "treachery". The story ends with Sylvia not completely understanding the point of the lesson, but you see a glimmer of understanding in her. It shows, with time, that she may understand after all.

Summary of Madera, Group 2

Susan Madera has had the unique experience of speaking two languages, proper English, and the neighborhood tongue. She has experienced multiple obsticals in order to overcome her pursuit to speak proper English. She was uncomfortable, and felt out of place because of this neighborhood tongue she couldn't get rid of. But through education, perseverance, and dedication she was able to understand what flaws in her speech needed improvement. Even though she wasn't speaking properly, she could write in the correct fashion that was academically required of her. The most important lesson learned in this writing is taht with dedication, persistance, and motivation you can overcome your flaws no matter what they may be. Not only has Madera become successful in her career, she has also become successful in her pursuit to be comfortable with the way she speaks. Even though her speech hasn't been perfected to her satisfaction, her writing style has.

Writing college level body paragraphs (group 3)

In “Poets in the Kitchen,” Paule felt that her inspiration came from the women in the kitchen, and although she felt that they “trained her ears,” it was actually all of her reading that she did in the library while waiting for the women to finish their cocoa and tea. Paule was supposed to sit quietly at the library and the only thing to do was read. As she had mentioned she “was sheltered from the storm of adolescence in the Macon Street Library, reading voraciously, indiscriminately, everything from Jane Austen to Zane Grey, but with a special passion for the long, full-blown, richly detailed eighteenth and nineteenth-century picaresque tales.” Of course the more you read the more you can understand and appreciate the beauty of a book, and Paule learned to love reading. Through her reading, she stumbled across poetry by Paul Dunbar, whom she found she could relate to. She fell in love with his poetry and how it spoke to her. She became broadminded and empathetic to what she read. If not for the library Paule would not have fallen in love with reading nor stumble across Paul’s poetry. She would have never encountered such a person in her school readings; they did not speak of such people back then, and thus developing her desire of someday writing.